A place to write responses to, and to build interpretations of, literature for College Writing II at Minnesota State Community and Technical College.
Saturday, January 24, 2009
I Stand Here Ironing
In "I Stand Here Ironing", Emily's mother feels a tremendous amount of guilt. This feeling is definitely warranted. There is a whole history of neglect to this first child, for example:"They persuaded me at the clinic to send her away to a convalescent home in the country where "she can have the kind of food and care you can't manage for her, and you'll be free to concentrate on the new baby."(285) It seems Emily's mother was easily influenced, and had skills of justifying her actions, which led to serial events of neglect. Now she is reminiscing about the past and understanding that she could of done things differently, feels it is "too late for Emily"(285). I think that it would be impossible for a mother not to feel guilty about the up-bringing Emily endured. I don't hold Emily's mother completely responsible for the neglect, as life is a huge obstacle, and the bills need to be paid somehow, but she could have made better choices. I believe she is an adequate mother because she did what she needed to do at the time, and Emily turns out alright, in-spite-of the events of her childhood. Now mother has insight and hopefully will try and make-up for lost time with Emily.
Thursday, January 22, 2009
"The Storm"
"The Storm"
When a sin is committed like the one in this story there is never and excuse for it. The storm is no excuse for Calizta and Alcee's actions. The storm may very well be the reason for why they end up under the same roof, the power of the dangerous storm bringing out their past feeling for each other, that are very strong, and powerful like the storm. They obviously still passionately care about each other. The storm in not the reason to act on those feelings. No they cannot control the strength of there feelings which my reflect on the power of the storm, causing Calizta fear, that leads her into Alcee's arms in the first place. The storm my be to blame for them being in each other company, but they can do the right thing and strictly only take cover to stay safe and out of harm. Instead Alcee's move to comfort Calizta end up causing more harm in possibly hurting the people they love along with themselves. They are responsible for their own actions and cannot use the storm as an excuse.
Wednesday, January 21, 2009
The Storm
In the Beginning of the story Calixta's husband (Bobinot), and son (Bibi) get stuck at Friedheimer's store waiting out a bad storm. Calixta is at home alone during the storm until M'sieur Alcee (A former fling) unexpectedly rides up on his horse. Calixta welcomes him inside to wait out the storm. Calixta and M'sieur Alcee are both well aware that they are married, but the temptations are too strong. Soon their lips are locked...and so on.
I do not think that the storm is an excuse in any way for Calixta's and M'sieur Alcee's affair. When two people are committed to each other in such a way as marriage there should be no excuse for those actions. When God wrote the seventh commandment (Thou shall not commit adultery), I doubt he viewed a storm let alone anything as an excuse to break that commandment. No matter how hard life is at the time or how big of an argument you are in with a partner, there should always be an alternative to cheating. My favorite quote in this story was, "So the storm passed and everyone was happy". It is the people who wait out that storms that are able to think about everything more logically.
Sunday, January 18, 2009
A&P
"A & P"
That Sammy says, or thinks, the things he does about the girls that come into the store shows that he has obviously not reached a level of maturity that society may deem acceptable. However, that he quit his job in the interest of upholding his own principles may prove otherwise. It can be argued that this is also a sign of lacking maturity, but I tend do disagree. Yes, Sammy may not have taken some important things into account (like not having a source of income after he'd made his decision) when determining the finality of his actions. But, to me, this is not a reflection of immaturity. I see this as an act of some integrity. Sometimes these things have to be disregarded when the sole aim is to act on one's principles. We would not be able to see this if we weren't allowed to see into Sammy's thought process. I think it is best shown when he says "... and my stomach kind of fell when I knew how hard the world was going to be to me hereafter." This is indeed an admission of maturity. Sammy knows what he did was hard, but, in his own mind, ultimately right.
"A&P"
At the end of the story Sammy decides to quit his job. After all his boss was being rude to those girls that he was watching. Then in the end everyone is happy when Sammy rebels and quits his job after his boss got upset about the girls not dressed appropriately. There was some other factors that motivated Sammy in quitting is the nice warm weather. He also seemed like he did not like his job.
"Story of an Hour"
The fifth paragraph in the story is one that shows the true feelings of Mrs. Mallard. When she looks out the window, she sees a picture of absolute renewal. This shows that her husband's death acts in this way, a certain rebirth. This is further explained when Chopin uses the phrase "suspension of intelligent thought" to show how Mrs. Mallard is looking forward into her bright future, rather than considering her married past. These thoughts are later addressed in paragraph ten when she realizes that freedom has entered her life. The last line of the story sums up just how the human condition is represented throughout. It seems the people in Mallard's life assumed her happiness in her marriage and were too ignorant to see that she wished to be freed from it all.
A&P
I think that Sammy's primary motivation for quitting his job was to impress the girls, which is why he said it loud enough for them to hear and he looked back to see if they had heard him. I also think that there was more to it than just trying to be a "hero" for some random girls. Like i said before it seemed that he maybe felt isolated and bored with his job. I think that throughout the story Sammy began to find himself and realized what he really wanted out of life. Ever since the girls walked in there was one that stuck out and that he admired (Queenie). At the end of the story when he saw how she stood up for herself, I think it gave him the motivation to stand up for himself and do what he has been wanting to do for a long time....quit his job.
The Story of an Hour
"A&P"
In the beginning of the story we learn that Sammy is young at age nineteen. He is attracted to these girls, and because of this makes a rash decision to quit his job. However, he makes it clear from the beginning that this job is unpleasant. On page 220, he describes a customer, "She's one of those cash-register-watchers... and I know it made her day to trip me up." We also know of his modest upbringing, which Sammy describes on page 222, "when my parents have somebody over they get lemonade..."
His initial motive may have been to impress these girls. On page 223 we experience his decision through his young, naive mind. "I say 'I quit' to Lengel, quick enough for them to hear, hoping they'll stop and watch me, their unsuspected hero." However, I feel there are deeper, underlying factors which cause Sammy to make this decision. Perhaps he feels stuck in a rut, not wanting to live a modest existence as his parents do. He may want to branch out, and although he feels fear in doing this, stated in the final phrase of the story on page 224, "My stomach kind of fell as I felt how hard the world was going to be to me hereafter." he doesn't turn back. I feel this is admirable, and will allow him courage in future decisions.
"A&P"
Sammy's primary motivation for quitting his job seems to be the urge to impress the three girls that were embarrassed by Lengel. We see this because he says that he watched for them to stop and look back at him, but they keep walking. Another reason he quits seems to be that his beliefs were challenged in the way Lengel publicly embarrasses the girls. Finally, we see his belief to always go through with your actions as his final motivation to go through with quitting his job.
Overall, we see Sammy struggle with his own personal beliefs being challenged and how to handle it without disappointing his parents. In the end, he quits his job regardless of how his parents will feel about it.
"A Story of an Hour"
I think that paragraph 5 means that she has accepted what has happened and that she is ready to start her new life over. Even though her husband’s death was tragic she realize that life still goes on around her.
I think in paragraph 7 that “suspension of intelligent thought” meant that she just didn’t know what to think about anything. She was just stunned by her husband’s death and not sure how to think. She felt like she was in opposite state of being because nothing felt real it is hard to imagine living without her husband.
The Passage where she said “Free, free, free!” It seemed that she was almost happy he was gone. She loved him and he was good to her but, she didn’t want to spend the rest of her life with him.