Wednesday, January 23, 2008

The Storm

"So the storm passed and everyone was happy." The ending was classic. " As Clarisse finished the letter from Alcee, she then had a sigh of relief." " The sun peered out of the blue Mississippi sky and the warmth of it made her calm." I could see that as addition to the story. The whole plot to me was great. The metaphors are fabulous." Sombre clouds rolling with sinister intention." Absolutley! That was the way Alcee was making the move on Calixata. Pretty smooth, I would say. Alcee took the situation to his advantage. This is definitly a story of natural danger, seduction and deception. It could also be called "The Storm of lust" it was a really interesting tale

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